You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser.
Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter
• expressing your interest in the role
• requesting more information about it
• explaining what experience you have
Dear Mr Anderson,
I am writing to express my interest for the post of social events organiser which was advertised on your website. I will be attending the event management program which is to be held on 23 December of this year and would love the chance to showcase my knowledge.
However, there was very little information regarding the duties that needs to be carried out as an organiser. I would request you to provide for the details on the matter. In addition, I would like to know if the position is contractual or permanent, which will help me plan my career in advance.
One of the prerequisites of the course was that participants were required to have some basic knowledge related to events. I am currently working as an intern in XYZ event management company, since the last 3 months. Furthermore, I have planned and hosted events for my friends special day. I also have a portfolio which display all the work accomplishments.
I, therefore, hope and pray that you will consider my request and provide me the opportunity. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Amelia Ames
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Anderson, I am writing to express my interest for ...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
...ress my interest for the post of social events organiser which was advertised on your ...
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Line 17, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...request and provide me the opportunity. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
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Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from you soon. Yours sincerely, Amelia Ames
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.921875 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87359850351 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2226908627 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.75 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187131046881 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606419242417 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366287986811 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968859241916 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462619222465 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.