You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organiser.
Write a letter to the Training Organiser
expressing your interest in the role
requesting more information about it
explaining what experience you have
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am interested in joining the training program next month that is taking place in the UK. As I heard from some colleagues, that you are willing to choose one of us to be the social events organizer.
I am willing to take this mission since it may boost my knowledge and work resume. Event planning is one of the most beautiful work yet hard to accomplish, but if you are passion about it you will succeed.
I would like from your side to assist me on some information regarding the number of guests, location and timing. Addition to that, what type of cuisine do you suggest we should include to our trainee and guests.
Regarding my CV I experienced event planning for 5 years while being a hostess in several companies. This has taught me how to speak out in-front of people, organize things as scheduled and respect the guest.
Thank you for your understanding. waiting for your reply.
Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, I am interested in joining the trai...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
...ng to choose one of us to be the social events organizer. I am willing to take this...
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Line 8, column 34, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Waiting
...est. Thank you for your understanding. waiting for your reply. Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70552147239 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60442273886 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693251533742 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3301716667 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190486564905 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689240170324 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050427150627 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992151644709 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069556207137 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.