Dear Sir or Madam,
I am one of the trainees who are going to attend the ‘customer care’ course in June and I am writing to you for expressing my interest in being the social events’ organizer for the group.
I would really appreciate if you could provide me with some information about programmer and the role in general Could you mention about the content of programmer, the size of group and the background of trainees? In addition, I was wondering if you could explain the responsibilities of being social events’ organizer.
I have some experience of acting this role. I had worked in media sector as event organizer. I was responsible to conceptualizing, planning and organizing events from start to finish in accordance with the client’s demands by most efficient and cost – effective way. The reason why I am interested in this role is about relating to my previous experiences
I look forward to hearing from you right away.
Best regards,
Mark Key
Client Advisor
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ked in media sector as event organizer. I was responsible to conceptualizing, pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06586826347 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17428532843 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634730538922 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5531926262 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227709164456 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845609903815 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692533179803 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129485922641 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754343582639 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.