You are in hospital as a result of a recent accident. Your co-workers have visited you several
times and have given you cards and flowers.
Write to your workmates. In your letter
Tell them about your current condition
Thank them for their thoughts and support
Dear friends,
How are these days without me in the office? Hope all of you're doing great. I'm feeling much better and hopefully, will discharge from hospital tomorrow after almost two weeks. That was a horrible accident which never imagined happening to someone. Luckily, I was able to pass through it. There are still few fractures and injuries that need more time to treat. Hence my general health condition is well recovered. I cannot wait to be home soon and I think next week, I'm going to able to work.
Anyway, I cannot express my emotion regards to your supports during my admission in the hospital. I don't know what might happened to me without you guys. I'm grateful to have such wonderful colleagues. Massive thanks for standing beside me and caring and also for sending fabulous flowers, gifts and cards. I wish I could compensate your kindness someday. Healthy and joyful life is my great wishes for you.
I'm looking forward to meeting you soon at work.
Love,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...s without me in the office? Hope all of youre doing great. Im feeling much better and...
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Suggestion: I'm
... office? Hope all of youre doing great. Im feeling much better and hopefully, will...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... injuries that need more time to treat. Hence my general health condition is well rec...
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Suggestion: I'm
... to be home soon and I think next week, Im going to able to work. Anyway, I canno...
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Suggestion: don't
... during my admission in the hospital. I dont know what might happened to me without ...
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Suggestion: I'm
... might happened to me without you guys. Im grateful to have such wonderful colleag...
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...yful life is my great wishes for you. Im looking forward to meeting you soon at ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, hence, if, look, so, still, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78235294118 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35897021694 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.741176470588 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7953341125 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.2 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3333333333 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18151689387 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491096477116 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478078961692 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113878880823 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068997484065 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.26 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.