You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say
– What is the reason for your leaving?
– What do you plan to do?
– Where and when will you meet your friend to discuss it?
Dear Sarah,
I hope you are well. I am going to leave the Smith industry after my contract comes to an end next month.
I have learnt an incredible amount during of my working time in Smith industry and it was a great experience for an overseas student. One of the prominent companies of my home town offered me a job in his company as a database administrator. I think that it would be a new achievement for me in this field and it will open new doors to better job opportunities in the future.
I have thought deep and long about this job proposal and after about 2 months I decide to accept this proposal and move to my country in order to be in the position.
I would be grateful if you could spare some time in order to discuss this issue and give your opinion since you have been working in this field for more than 8 years. Please let me know if Sunday evening, 23th of June at 7 pm suits you.
I wish you can make it and hope to see you soon.
Best wishes,
Rahi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...contract comes to an end next month. I have learnt an incredible amount during...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ntry in order to be in the position. I would be grateful if you could spare so...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19371727749 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3318598247 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607329842932 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.499108903 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174826554463 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647295376002 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579072465855 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101026321882 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634859404985 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.