You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you think you could start
Dear Manager,
My name is John Cortes, and I am currently a final year student at the University of Toronto, pursuing a degree in Physical Education. I am writing in regards to the position of part-time football assistant coach of the Under-15 mixed category that you have advertised recently on your website.
For the past three years, I have been volunteering with the Blue Sharks, a community football team from a neighbourhood near my campus. Throughout this time, I have worked extensively with teenagers from the mixed-gender junior squad, assisting with the planning and organization of regular training sessions. I have also provided support during events and competitions, such as in the recent Toronto Youth Games, when I was responsible for the pre-games preparation and helped supervised the teens during the day. In addition, I would like to point out that I am highly proficient in conducting individual evaluations on players and that I have developed a keen eye for scouting talents.
Finally, I would like to bring to your attention that I am currently undertaking my mid-term exams this week, but I will be available from July 12th onwards. Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
John Cortes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ree in Physical Education. I am writing in regards to the position of part-time football assi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, look, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13658536585 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94807734359 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648780487805 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1800583001 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198823173055 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938454511218 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102847877625 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142960804943 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430117933256 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.