You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club.
Write a letter to the manager of the golf club.
In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you could start
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Mahesh Sharma and I am a second year M.Com. student studying in a reputed college.Along with studies,I am interested in doing some work also to gain some experience.I am writing this letter to ask you whether there is a part-time job facility is available at a golf club.The best part is the golf club is within 2 km from my college which is an advantage.
As a post-graduate student,I have various subjects;but I am very good at finance and accounting.I can resolve any problem related to accounts in a quick and easy manner.Also,I used to take tuitions after my graduation where my special subjects were finance and accounts always.If you wish,you can take a test about the same to check my knowledge and skills.
I assure you that this will neither impact my studies nor this job.I will do it with utmost dedication.If I get selected,can start from next week onwards.
I am sure you will give this opportunity to me.
Hope to get a positive response soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mahesh Sharma
- Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation buses trains subways Why Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay 76
- You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college In your letter Explain where your apartment is Describe the room What kind of person would 73
- It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time Tell him the best time of the year to come What places they could visit Invite them to come to your house 73
- You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wron 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Mahesh Sharma and I am a seco...
^^^
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Com
... Mahesh Sharma and I am a second year M.Com. student studying in a reputed college....
^^^
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Student
...sh Sharma and I am a second year M.Com. student studying in a reputed college.Along wit...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Along
.... student studying in a reputed college.Along with studies,I am interested in doing s...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... in a reputed college.Along with studies,I am interested in doing some work also t...
^^
Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... some work also to gain some experience.I am writing this letter to ask you wheth...
^
Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ob facility is available at a golf club.The best part is the golf club is within 2 ...
^^^
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... advantage. As a post-graduate student,I have various subjects;but I am very goo...
^^
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... am very good at finance and accounting.I can resolve any problem related to acco...
^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
... to accounts in a quick and easy manner.Also,I used to take tuitions after my gradua...
^^^^
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...accounts in a quick and easy manner.Also,I used to take tuitions after my graduati...
^^
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...bjects were finance and accounts always.If you wish,you can take a test about the ...
^^
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
... finance and accounts always.If you wish,you can take a test about the same to check...
^^^^
Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... neither impact my studies nor this job.I will do it with utmost dedication.If I ...
^
Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...job.I will do it with utmost dedication.If I get selected,can start from next week...
^^
Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , can
...with utmost dedication.If I get selected,can start from next week onwards. I am su...
^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sitive response soon. Yours sincerely, Mahesh Sharma
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77653631285 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89403808655 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.091155883 44.8134815571 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 16.8248392259 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216979188521 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793240292064 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807973210299 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963702507908 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721675865372 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.