You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
and say what experience and skills you have
Hello sir or madam,
Myself is Raghav and I am a student of MBA and studying in city management college. I am writing here in regards of a part time job. I am looking for an opprtunity of management trainee or junior management associate.
As mentioned above, I am a student of management and in order to complete my dissertation and aquring a real time industry experience I am looking out for part time job in the management field. I am allowed to spend twenty hours of a week in job. Therefore, it will not be an issue from my college realated to timing.
Regarding the specifics of my skill set, I am very well versed in data visualization like Microsoft XL and Power BI along with it, I am good at accounting and people management as well. At the time of graduation, I was working at an accouting firm where I was taking care of client's ledgers and preaparing the expanse charts.
Hope the skills and experience I am holding would help you to find a suitable employment for me. I am also enclosing my latest resume and the experience letter with the letter.
Looking forward to hearing a positive response from you.
Thank you.
Your faithfully,
Raghav.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...y management college. I am writing here in regards of a part time job. I am looking for an op...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...lege. I am writing here in regards of a part time job. I am looking for an opprtunity of ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ndustry experience I am looking out for part time job in the management field. I am allow...
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Line 9, column 51, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help you find' instead.
Suggestion: help you find
...kills and experience I am holding would help you to find a suitable employment for me. I am also...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65550239234 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82183904174 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9350913862 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0833333333 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249227273114 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10070684471 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717433680707 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137028948819 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06533226025 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.