You are moving home write a letter to your neighbors to say goodbye to them and to thank for their help during your stay.
Explain how they helped you
say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived.
invite them to visirt you at your new home.
Dear Mr. Brown and mrs. Brown,
I would like to share an exciting news with you that I am promoted to Branch Head of Dolphin Bank at Boston, so I am shifting there this Monday. It has been more than five years since I bought this house and you were always by my side since then. I still remember when I moved you was the one who talked and immidiately became my friend and introduced my family and me to others which really helped us to mix up with the new environment. You introduced me with nearby area and your family supported my family whenever I was on business trips.
It is hard to leave this wonderful, calm, and beautiful place. Undoubtly, my family and me will miss living here especially the stunning views of mountains in summers as where I am moving is a crowded city with a lot of skyscrappers.
I would be so happy if you could come to my new house next Sunday. I am arranging a party at my new place. The address is 13D, Silver street, Downtown, Boston. Hoping to meet you at my new home.
With Regards,
John,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'exciting news'.
Suggestion: exciting news
...nd mrs. Brown, I would like to share an exciting news with you that I am promoted to Branch H...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... promoted to Branch Head of Dolphin Bank at Boston, so I am shifting there this M...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34871794872 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40745063094 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4768880949 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213392855535 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765509915201 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751486442025 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105466838415 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788852825738 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.