You are not satisfied with the changing room in a sports centre that you visit.
Write a letter to the sports center manager. In your letter:
- Explain the problem
- Say how you feel about this problem
- And say what steps you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the condition of the female changing room in the Fit24 sports center which you are managing.
I had seen so many attractive advertisements about the Fit24 center with brand-new facilities that I immediately register for a membership. Unfortunately, I was extremely disappointed to when I was there for the first time. The facilities were not as advertised, especially the female changing room. Firstly, the mirror in this room had a cracked hole which is a serious safety hazard to all customers. Besides, I noticed that the floor was dirty. It must have not been swept and mopped for a long time. These situations were not acceptable, which made me out of energy to do any fitness activities at your center.
For the safety of myself as well as all of your customers, I suggest carrying out some improvements to the center. I highly request to replace the mirror as well as clean the floor as soon as possible. Moreover, the center needs a proper cleaning schedule in order to take care of all the facilities, thus bringing pleasant customer’s experience.
I hope you could have some prompt solutions for this issue.
Yours faithfully,
My Nguyen.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94711538462 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95641023904 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610576923077 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4154461069 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1538461538 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177861860605 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534142264224 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715881688443 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133651072221 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10252490961 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.