A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Explain why do you think your friend would enjoy a camping day
- Describe some possible disadvantages
- Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Kevin,
It’s great to hear from you. It’s been a long time since the last time we met at Clara’s party. I am extremely excited to know that you are going to have an adventure this summer. I can’t wait to tell you what I am expecting from your trip to Lake Luc camping.
I am definitely sure you will have a lot of fond memories of the upcoming summer camping. First of all, a camping holiday is a wonderful chance for you to enhance your energy. I know that you’ve passed the exam with the highest score and I am admired for your hard-working. Now, it’s time for you to take a rest, do some recreational activities in to release stress. Secondly, Lake Luc is the most famous for its bio-diversity. You will find lots of unusual birds and mushrooms while trekking in the forest, especially in the summer. Moreover, you will be astonished with by their spectacular view. From the summit of the mountain, you can overlook the glistening river as well as a carpet of flowers.
However, if you want to enjoy the moment perfectly, you should be well-prepared for your first time. Camping in the forest is quite dangerous at night, so don’t go too far from your tent when it’s dark. And you should bring more warm clothes in case the temperature will go down at night.
I would love to accompany you and we can cherish the moment together. Unfortunately, my family plans to visit my grandparents next week. I wish I could join you on another occasion. I hope you will have wonderful moments and don’t forget to share your experiences when you are back.
Hope to see you soon.
Best Regards,
Ame
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 291.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5704467354 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60891968029 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7841203394 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.3333333333 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260055050701 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768603969742 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760460469349 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140873792452 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719107276746 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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