Researchers have found, people are living longer life in most parts of the world. In today's time it is not less than a blessing by looking at current the current scenario and specially the lifestyle of people. Now the question raises whether it is positive or negative development. In the below paragraphs I shall put forth the possible causes behind this situation.
Firstly, healthy lifestyle plays significant role in every individual life and lead hem to live longer. In most place of the countries, people already understand the importance of health and accordingly they keep themselves. They do excercises and involved themselves to maintain their fitness level by walk, gym, playing any outdoor sports game.In most of the countries like China, people give importance to work , study along with proper breaks, even for their nap. They designed their routine life keeping in mind their body needs and requirements.
Secondly, in most part of the world people prefer to eat organic food only, like in India, Meghalaya is the only state where people cultivate and consume organic food. Because this people living a long life. Limiting from consuming faulty food habits gives rise to good results on the health of individual.
Thirdly, diet plays vital role. In village people are living a simple life with their hard work and consuming healthy diet. Researchers have found, generally all the villagers as compare to people who lives in urban areas live longer. Lastly , pollution is another main cause, areas were pollution is less and have more natural surroundings help people to live longer. For example, people living in mountain region generally they have longer average life between 80 -100 years.
To sum up, living a longer life depends upon various aspects and accordingly people are availing and continuing to life longer in most part of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15460526316 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50591380507 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8413612657 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1764705882 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328266995133 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107009658137 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901725172135 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194499701196 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078381580545 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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