You are planning to stay in a hotel in an English speaking country. You are writing to the
hotel manager to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following
questions:
• What the daily rate for one standard room is
• What are the facilities in the hotel
• Whether the hotel offers excursions to the nearby tourist sites
There is no need to include names and addresses.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to you to request details about your hotel and its services. I plan to stay at
your establishment in one month’s time and there are a number of points which I would be
grateful if you could clarify for me. This will allow me to plan my holiday in your country
more effectively and thereby give me the opportunity to maximize my vacation time.
First of all, could you please inform me as to what the current daily rate is for one standard
room. If the quoted price is satisfactory then I would like to proceed to reserve the room
for one week from the first of March to the eighth of March.
Secondly, I would appreciate it if you could additionally provide me with details of what the
hotel facilities are at your establishment. Could you please confirm for me that you have a
gym and a swimming pool for the use of the hotel guests.
Finally, I am interested in visiting the local tourist sites and so would greatly appreciate it if
you could provide me with details of any excursions which your hotel may run to these
destinations.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Best regards,
Ragesh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66183574879 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63863655257 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5676774234 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.29896907216 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277714861159 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115122149838 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835962794632 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101241272543 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783637226757 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.