You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think the place is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague-
- explain why you are shifting out.
- Describe your accommodation
- Why is it suitable for your friend?
Dear James,
hope you are doing fine. I heard the news from peter that you recently got a job in NewJersy and congratulations for getting this good opportunity. Unfortunately, i will not be able to meet you as my company is transferring me to california branch for work.
In the last week, there was a performance review meeting with my manager and had long discussions about my achievements. Looking into my overall tasks completed in stipulated time, I was promoted to Regional manager of the california branch office. my accommodation is fully furnished with two rooms, hall and kitchen. there is a wonderful garden in the backyard and a mini swimming pool. Moreover, the furniture is new brand and there is a state-of-art gym with modern amenities.
I believe this accommodation would be more suitable for you as it is located in the Centre of the town.
Additionally, the supermarket is nearby and also there is a bus stand which is 2 minutes walking distance from the accommodation. this will reduce your commuting time which can be invested in doing other extracurricular activities.
hope to see you soon and let me know if you need any further assistance.
Yours Truly,
Jeet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear James, hope you are doing fine. I heard the new...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g this good opportunity. Unfortunately, i will not be able to meet you as my comp...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rring me to california branch for work. In the last week, there was a performanc...
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Line 9, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...anager of the california branch office. my accommodation is fully furnished with t...
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Line 9, column 320, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ished with two rooms, hall and kitchen. there is a wonderful garden in the backyard a...
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Line 15, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...alking distance from the accommodation. this will reduce your commuting time which c...
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Line 15, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...doing other extracurricular activities. hope to see you soon and let me know if ...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...her extracurricular activities. hope to see you soon and let me know if you ...
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Line 23, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y further assistance. Yours Truly, Jeet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03980099502 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13232187217 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646766169154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6694037416 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9230769231 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171259598673 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610404198915 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571540659681 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918821173725 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480142908428 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.