You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,say
what the problem is
describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Mr.James,
I am Barkavi, a first year student staying in 12b, Town hall A. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction and formally report about the accommodation provided for me.
To begin with, the room that was allotted under my name is quite far away from the campus, so it takes an extremely long time for me to reach the class every day. In addition, there is no adequate space in the room due to the fact that, it is shared by two other pupils of same department.
At the time of enrollment, I was informed that a private room with attached bathroom will be provided for me . Furthermore, I was under the impression that the stay would be near to the university.Hence, I request to you reallocate a separate place for me and also keep in mind that it should be closer to the college.
I eagerly await for your prompt response in this matter.
Yours Sincerely,
Barkavi
- You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weeken
- You read a newspaper article that captured your attention Write a letter to your friend and recommend reading the article Include the following in your letter Where and when the article was published What the article was about Why it is important that you 84
- There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically As a result some people believe that non academic subjects such as physical education and cookery should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on acade 84
- Some people think that famous people can help international aid organizations to draw attention to important problems Others believe that celebrities can make the problem seem less important 89
- You are studying a short course in another country Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider There is a major problem with the accommodation Write a letter to the course provider In your letter say what the problem is describe the accommodati 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: James
Dear Mr.James, I am Barkavi, a first year student ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by two other pupils of same department. At the time of enrollment, I was informe...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ttached bathroom will be provided for me . Furthermore, I was under the impression...
^^
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...he stay would be near to the university.Hence, I request to you reallocate a separate...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79578299845 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672839506173 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0549488946 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127187768859 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059582576808 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536354964916 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686371387529 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350404181431 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.