Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest?
All over the world health warnings have been given to the people on smoking. Despite the warning, a large number of people still continue to smoke all over the world. This essay will discuss its causes and its solutions.
Smoking is injurious to health. Smoking has become an addiction to many people nowadays. In Spite of being aware of the consequences they would face, people still cannot stop smoking. As days go by it affects the lungs and will lead to more serious health problems like cancer. Not only the person who smoke's get affected. The people around them are also in danger. Because of the people who smoke, even childrens get affected. Now a days even children have started to smoke which has to be seriously addressed. Smoking is also a kind of pollution to the environment. Smoker's drop cigarette bits on the roads which makes the place look not so clean.
In my opinion smoking can not be banned entirely. But the government can definitely pass certain rules and regulations in a way that the effect of smoke can be minimised. For example, in Singapore smoking in public places has been outlawed. Heavy fines are charged to the smoker's if they get caught. So people there are scared and do not smoke in public places. People must make sure they leave all the cigarette waste in the dustbin. Elder's must try to avoid smoking within their house so that it doesn't affect their family member's. Cigarettes must be sold only for people of a certain age. It should not be available to youngsters. Vendors who sell cigars to children must be punished seriously.
Overall we have seen that just warning the people not to smoke will not stop people from smoking. The government must really take serious actions to reduce the effect that smoking creates. Else even non smokers will get affected. People must realise that it doesn't only affect themselves but also the people around them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...people on smoking. Despite the warning, a large number of people still continue to smoke all over...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: The surrounding people
...nly the person who smokes get affected. The people around them are also in danger. Because of the peop...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...who smoke, even childrens get affected. Now a days even children have started to smoke whi...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...smoke, even childrens get affected. Now a days even children have started to smoke whi...
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...d smoking within their house so that it doesnt affect their family members. Cigarettes...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t affected. People must realise that it doesnt only affect themselves but also the peo...
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Line 7, column 298, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... doesnt only affect themselves but also the people around them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, still, as to, for example, kind of, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78723404255 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32375939479 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528875379939 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9258008004 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.3333333333 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1851851852 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.51851851852 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289426376083 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830312125012 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843643000536 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201078375146 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101652783484 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.