You are unable to pay your rent due to some financial problems you are facing. Write a letter to your landlord telling him
Why you are writing him
Why you are unable to pay your rent
When you will be able to pay your rent
Dear Mr Bells,
I am writing to apologise for my inability to pay for the month's rent due to some financial challenges I am currently facing.
I am writing an important professional examination this month which is dependent on my promotion at my workplace. This is a part of my end of year appraisal, and as a result, I had taken some preparatory classes to enable me excel and I have spent a lot.
Hopefully, I will be paying you two months rent by the end of the month when I receive my salary. I deeply regret any inconveniences this might have caused you.
I will be grateful if you will oblige me this opportunity. Hoping to get a positive feedback from you soonest..
Yours sincerely,
Ms Jane.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...get a positive feedback from you soonest.. Yours sincerely, Ms Jane.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 589.0 937.175257732 63% => OK
No of words: 128.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6015625 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92799951372 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 127.690721649 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.512150955 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.625 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283976382946 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118061001632 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645663608373 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157913821657 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079638722093 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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