More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.
Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.
Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, expert in field of engineering, medicine, computing are relocating to developed nations from developing countries. It is the opinion of some person that these movement as led to deprivation of best brains while others feel that it is a normal movement plan embark upon by these experts in search of better opportunities. In my opinion, I agree that this movement is a normal move design around the globe to foster development and investment.
To begin with, some believe that experts moving to developed countries from developing countries is like stealing from them. It is believe that these countries already have capable hands in these field of study, hence employing best hands from developing countries is tantamount to loss of best brains to these foreigners. Take for instance, Nigeria medical association in a recent survey conducted, said that 70% of expert graduate are leaving the country to developed nations such as UK, USA, Canada, Australia resulting in a relapse of medical conditions in Nigeria. However, I believe the unemployment nature of the country made it necessary for their migration to these countries for better opportunities as well as good pay.
Further more, movement of these specialists from developing countries to developed countries is robbing them of the opportunities of becoming developed due to the hands employed by these countries, which are useful instruments in developing country. However the move movement is a natural event by these experts to enhance development of their nation through their ability in their fields of study. For example, Indians and Chinese are well known as experts in the field of engineering and technology. This is possible because, majority of them are immigrants in these foreign countries which allows them to make use of the experience gotten from them to the best of their own country when they come back to their country.
Conclusively, Although relocation of experts in some field to developed countries as led to deprivation of best hands in these field of study in the developing countries. However, I strongly agree that these movement has brought development and investment into the poor countries through these movement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...estment into the poor countries through these movement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30028328612 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90063129931 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458923512748 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8980673104 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.923076923 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19350159411 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086774201841 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662440162518 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129566390948 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394016841839 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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