You are working at a company. Write a letter to your manager to recommend the opening a cafeteria at work. In your letter say why it is required?Give recommendations on how and where to do it.Explain why it would be beneficial for all the workers.
Dear Mr. David,
I am writing this letter with regard to opening a cafeteria at our office. This is the main concern of most of the working members at our office.
There are several other reasons for this requirement. Firstly, there are around 1500 employees working all days and at all shifts, we are in need of a place for having some good food and some food stalls. Secondly, we cannot expect all the staffs to bring food from home. Further more, our work place is far away from the city, which makes it impossible to commute to any nearby hotels.
I would suggest that the empty space near the car park would be an ideal place to build a shelter and establish the cafeteria. More over there is also water facility available near it, which would be easy for washing hands and the soiled vessels.The cafeteria once formed will benefit all the workers of our office as they can get freshly cooked food anytime and need not worry of starving if they did not bring food from home.
Kindly consider my request and do the needful. I look forward to hearing from you
Yours sincerely
Dheepa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...or washing hands and the soiled vessels.The cafeteria once formed will benefit all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6345177665 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15543060896 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649746192893 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7627340616 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213673554924 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07684304718 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440356994375 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111085769591 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505945402009 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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