You are working for a company.You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager.In your letter: explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.
Dear Mr daniali,
I am your computer employee, who is responsible for writing office letters and sending them to related departments.I am writing a letter requesting you to leave me.
I am studying computer science at the University of Tehran and my exams are starting in a few days. Given that I work and study, I have not had time to read my books.
I ask you to agree to my one week leave so that I can pass my exams well.I have to take two exams every day in order not to take more leave.
Of course I will tell you that this year I did not have any vacations and even attended holidays on some days.
I have typed and scanned all the office letters and saved them in a special folder. I have also spoken with a colleague of mine to refer each letter to its respective department on its own day.You can also give him all the things I do. I assure you that he is a reliable person. He does everything well.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours sincerely,
Behzadi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...and sending them to related departments.I am writing a letter requesting you to l...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...letter requesting you to leave me. I am studying computer science at the Uni...
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Line 15, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... leave so that I can pass my exams well.I have to take two exams every day in ord...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...ts respective department on its own day.You can also give him all the things I do. ...
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Line 29, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from you as soon as possible Yours sincerely, Behzadi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42408376963 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39904863137 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8585415574 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268217116877 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922054620936 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565226525894 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116142007139 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262728687243 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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