You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
explain the important event
apologise for the situation
suggest a new arrangement
Dear Ana,
ear Ana,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I’m writing this letter to inform you that something has come up which will affect my visit to you. Actually my Manager is sending me to somewhere for a very pertinent project. I cannot say no to my boss as it will affect my chances of promotion. It was totally unexpected.
I’m really sorry for this sudden change. I also wanted to come but i’m in a situation to cancel this visit. Otherwise,You know that i never break from my promise
Could you let me know of another time you will be free. instead of coming next week, I can make it on 1st week in April. Is April a possibility for you?. Please reply me back as you get this I hope you will understand me.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
See you soon,
Manish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ear
ear Ana, I hope this letter finds you in...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
ear Ana, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
^^
Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou. Actually my Manager is sending me to somewhere for a very pertinent project. ...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I’m'?
Suggestion: I’m
...udden change. I also wanted to come but i’m in a situation to cancel this visit. O...
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Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so wanted to come but i’m in a situation to cancel this visit. Otherwise,You know...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , You
...tuation to cancel this visit. Otherwise,You know that i never break from my promise...
^^^^
Line 6, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...know of another time you will be free. instead of coming next week, I can make it on 1...
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Line 6, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... make it on 1st week in April. Is April a possibility for you?. Please reply me...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m looking forward to hearing from you. See you soon, Manish
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, look, really, so, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39215686275 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3172308294 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7462323841 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.6923076923 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7692307692 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174854384729 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682026213463 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552411171073 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103929238631 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239396198826 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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