In some countries, Where both parents are working, there has been an increasing trend of day boarding school. while this trend has both pros and cons, I some schools are open till late so children can be looked after when parents at work. discuss the merits and demerits
In some countries, Where both parents are working, there has been an increasing trend of day boarding school. while this trend has both pros and cons, I believe merits largely outweigh the demerits.
There are many benefits of this trend. Firstly, as we know parents are purposefully engrossed in their work and they devote most of their time to lay found foundation in their career. Therefore, when their children return from school, they often spend their precious time in unproductive activities like watching tv, playing video games, which not only bad for their eyesight but also spoil their habit of studying. on the other hand, when they stay at schools they can revise the content taught in the class, which would aid them to consolidate and clarify what was learned in the class. In addition, after school hours, children stay alone at home. they should not be left unsupervised because they are more prone to indulge in immoral activities. Also, in recent research, it is shown that most juvenile crimes are committed between 3 to 7 pm. so these types of incidents can be tackled with these extended school hours. Moreover, These schools also provide recreational, and free-time activities which are very crucial for their holistic development. For instance, On the school premises, they have classes for music, theatre, and Different sports. These classes act as a stress buster and also it is scientifically proven that the subjects like music develop their cognitive abilities.
Staying in school till late has a few disadvantages too. to begin with, when they come back after spending a long time at school, they get tired and usually go to bed after having a meal. Hence, their parents do not get to spend quality time with their parents which in turn may weaken their relationship. Also, the prices of these day-boarding schools are quite high, so it is out of the pockets of many parents.
To sum up, Although, day-boarding schools have some cons. but their advantages are far more than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86646884273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47601176087 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569732937685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 337.0 20.2975951904 1660% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1640.0 106.682146367 1537% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 337.0 20.7667163134 1623% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 145.0 7.06120827912 2053% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31177949934 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.31177949934 0.084324248473 370% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26358376702 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.223330692591 0.056905535591 392% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 170.0 13.0946893788 1298% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -262.12 50.2224549098 -522% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 133.5 11.3001002004 1181% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.45 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.68 8.58950901804 276% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.8 10.1190380762 1352% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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