You could not visit a friend inspite of being in the town
- apologise
- explain why
- decide when you aill meet next
Dear Anah,
I hope you're in radiant health and best spirits. I was dancing with joy when I got to know that the seeminar is going to be held in Mumbai and I had cent percent plans to come and see you but I am really very sorry that I couldn't visit you.
Actually the seminar ended late i.e at 7:30 pm instead of 6:00, as there was a power cut and the generator wasn't working too. As you're aware that the last train that goes to my town is at 8:00 pm, I had to rush to catch the last available transport. In the mean course of time I forgot to contact you. I was a bit disheartened as the situation ruined our entire plan to meet.
However, I've got something great for you. I know how big of a fan you're of Arijit Singh and to your surprise I've got tickets of his live concert. I would be delighted if you'll join us. It will be held on next saturday in my city.
I hope to see you there. Consider my apology for spoiling the earlier plan.
Miss you,
Pri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Anah, I hope youre in radiant health and best ...
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Suggestion: you're
Dear Anah, I hope youre in radiant health and best spirits. I w...
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Suggestion: couldn't
...e you but I am really very sorry that I couldnt visit you. Actually the seminar e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly very sorry that I couldnt visit you. Actually the seminar ended late i.e at 7...
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Suggestion: wasn't
...there was a power cut and the generator wasnt working too. As youre aware that the la...
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Suggestion: you're
...and the generator wasnt working too. As youre aware that the last train that goes to ...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...tuation ruined our entire plan to meet. However, Ive got something great for you...
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... our entire plan to meet. However, Ive got something great for you. I know how...
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... great for you. I know how big of a fan youre of Arijit Singh and to your surprise Iv...
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Suggestion: I've
...re of Arijit Singh and to your surprise Ive got tickets of his live concert. I woul...
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...s live concert. I would be delighted if youll join us. It will be held on next saturd...
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Suggestion:
...oin us. It will be held on next saturday in my city. I hope to see you there. ...
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...l be held on next saturday in my city. I hope to see you there. Consider my apo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...spoiling the earlier plan. Miss you, Pri
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04166666667 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10561006599 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8951023425 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6923076923 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198431570587 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701093950302 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630864762595 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104852272666 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385224395932 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.56 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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