You had a dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to you friend and express your feelings about the dinner.
In your letter, you should:
• say what you enjoyed at the dinner
• describe how you feel about his/her family
• invite your friend and his family to you place.
Dear Susan,
Hope you are doing great with your health and spirit. I am writing this letter to invite you and your family to my party in the garden of my house.
Last weekend, I had a good time in my life because the first time, I have dinner with a friend’s family. I had attended a lot of activities such as sing songs, play games and so on. Most of the things that I had eaten some foods made by your mother which is extremely delicious.
Besides, when I joined your family in your warm house, I feel comfortable and relaxed. Your parent is extremely good, your brother very funny and your puppy is so cute. They also made me feel happier when giving me a gift that I was very like.
The last of things, for thank your dinner I would invite you and your family to my house next weekend. I will prepare a big party to make you satisfied.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Tom
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, so, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41040462428 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18790517744 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624277456647 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8532181534 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.5833333333 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441169737279 0.216113520407 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13973516237 0.0766984524023 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929474527702 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228060355851 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823051222832 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.97 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.