Dear Sam,
I know I planned to visit you on 4th February 2022 but there’s an event at home I’ll have to be in attendance.
It is the burial ceremony of my late uncle Uche that was a former Commissioner of Sports in Abia State. He gave up the ghost on 28th January 2022 after a brief illness. This came as a shock to the whole family but life has to go on.
I’m really sorry about the disappointment and I promise to make it up to you once I arrive. We had a lot of involvements mapped out for this particular visit and I’m still looking forward to each one.
The summer will be a good time to come over, because there will be fewer activities for me to engage in. During my leave from work I’d be chanced too or we can just come up with a date that will suit both of us since I am the CEO of my company.
All the best.
Adam Grant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I know I planned to visit you on 4th Feb...
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Line 17, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpany. All the best. Adam Grant
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1775147929 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26813309048 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704142011834 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4839969871 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4444444444 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144047275017 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434451627533 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707406020225 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987543813107 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099409511478 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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