Dear Sam,
I will no longer visit Canada on 4th February 2022 as scheduled. I got a call this morning which is about an event at home I’ll have to attend.
It is the burial ceremony of my late uncle Uche that was a former Commissioner of Sports in Abia State. He gave up the ghost on 28th January 2022 after a brief illness. This came as a shock to the whole family but life has to go on.
I’m really sorry about the disappointment and I promise to make it up to you once I arrive. We had a lot of plans mapped out for this particular visit and I’m still looking forward to each one of them especially the boat ride.
I’d be free during the summer and will have fewer engagements. My leave at work starts in July and this is also a good time to come over so let me know which is preferable.
I hope to see you soon.
Adam Grant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I will no longer visit Canada on 4th Feb...
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Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I hope to see you soon. Adam Grant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21686746988 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26018444711 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710843373494 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8159268199 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157493985263 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498961669282 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515500263615 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844050738822 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680703775238 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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