Dear Dan,
I have an event coming up on 4th February 2022 which would affect my trip which is supposed to be on 1st February 2022.
Sponsors are traveling all the way from the United States of America to come and invest in my music career. The Extended Playlist I released last week just gained the attention of Bad Boy Records; this is a dream come true. I worked very hard on that project so this hasn’t come as a shock to me at all.
I’m sorry for the disappointments this might cause due to the plans we had before now and I promise to make it up to you once I arrive. I know we have a lot of activities mapped out so I’m still looking forward to each one of them.
I would have to reschedule my flight for 1st March 2022 once I’m done signing the contract to my new Record Deal. Another good arrangement will be when I’m embarking on my Radio Tour which will take place in Ontario on 7th December 2022.
I can’t wait to see you.
Take care,
Adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Dan, I have an event coming up on 4th Februar...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ise to make it up to you once I arrive. I know we have a lot of activities mapped...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ooking forward to each one of them. I would have to reschedule my flight for ...
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Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'Record'.
Suggestion: Record
...nce I’m done signing the contract to my new Record Deal. Another good arrangement will be ...
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Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I can’t wait to see you. Take care, Adam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29569892473 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26126884778 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7322287318 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118144636813 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417121931296 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321608256275 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668711224964 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028256590032 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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