Dear Max,
I have canceled my flight to Canada which is on the 4th of February 2022 because of an important event that just came up.
As I have said earlier, my younger sister’s long time boyfriend is planning a surprise engagement party for her on the 1st of February 2022. Since the both of them started dating, I’ve always been there for them in terms of relationship advice. Despite the fact she has a step brother, my attendance is mandatory because you know I’m her only biological brother.
In this case I know the disappointment this has caused but please accept my apologies. It’s not my fault that I couldn’t keep to my words or that I disappointed you. I’d make it up to you once I come over to see you for friendship sake.
My one year study leave starts on 1st March 2022 and I’ll be able to see you before I head to my school in Mexico which resumes on 10th March 2022. During the summer is also a good time to visit; schools won’t be in session then.
Can’t wait to see you.
Adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: step-brother
...ship advice. Despite the fact she has a step brother, my attendance is mandatory because you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4708994709 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44732874568 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1585397935 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142712436428 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588128890527 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455466229258 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887246683127 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435606260648 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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