You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working.
In your letter
1. Describe the work you have been doing
2. Explain why you can no longer do this work
3. Recommend another person who is interested in the work
Dear Ben,
This is to regretfully inform you that I will not be able to continue my association as a teacher with your Non-Governmental organisation “Goonj”. I currently teach English to underprivileged children and edify girls about personal hygiene in a local night school. However, due to some personal reason, I will not be able to continue. To elucidate, I am relocating to India next month. The preponderant reason being since my aged parents stay there and of late, their health is not keeping well so I have to relocate and take good care of them. Hence, I will not be able to continue my voluntary work with quasi.
However, it would be my pleasure to introduce my peer from the same college. She is an acquaintance and is actively involved in many charitable activities. She expressed her interest to do volunteering work. Additionally, I believe she will be a great fit to your team.
Finally, I would like to thank everyone from the organization who stood by me during my tenure and especially you for providing guidance and exceptional support. I would also like to wish organisation success in future endeavours and hope that our paths will cross again.
Yours sincerely,
Darwin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ben, This is to regretfully inform you that I...
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Line 2, column 624, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... continue my voluntary work with quasi. However, it would be my pleasure to intr...
^^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aths will cross again. Yours sincerely, Darwin
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96551724138 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17255912527 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660098522167 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1144501182 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5384615385 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162033379739 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527269011161 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467074152844 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089894825057 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329880540777 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.