Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed witht some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
- Thank them for the photos and for the holiday
- Explain why didn’t write earlier
- Invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Sam,
Hope you are hale and healthy. I received your letter earlier week and the photographs also which you have emailed me. I wanted to thank you for such a lovely and wonderful time that I spent at your place last month. I was overwhelmed with your hospitality and your cooking skills are amazing. I saw the photos and it undoubtedly shows how much fun we had. The thing which I liked the most was your company and the white sand beach in Krabi where we did Kayaking and snorkeling. These two were the show-stoppers.
After coming back I could not get time to express my gratitude as I was on business travel and came back yesterday. Now, you must plan a trip to India and let me do the honors to take you to the mesmerizing views and will take you to the locations where you can see the real snow. I remember you told me once that you want to visit a hill station. let's work it out and plan it in advance so that we can get the bookings done well in advance.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Regards
Nisha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... that I spent at your place last month. I was overwhelmed with your hospitality a...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...s overwhelmed with your hospitality and your cooking skills are amazing. I saw the p...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ty and your cooking skills are amazing. I saw the photos and it undoubtedly shows...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'kayak'
Suggestion: Kayak
... white sand beach in Krabi where we did Kayaking and snorkeling. These two were the show...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lets
... that you want to visit a hill station. lets work it out and plan it in advance so t...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... that you want to visit a hill station. lets work it out and plan it in advance so t...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you. Regards Nisha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31647332214 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9915671584 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4166666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287255237967 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888930811039 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763598193627 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17281421268 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897505283541 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.