Dear Sam,
How have you been? Its almost a year since we met. I hope you are doing great in your studies. I have a good news, I am abou to move to your city soon. Our fun is going to start allover again, as I have been fortunate enough to secure a job in WIPRO and placed as a manager in New Delhi branch.
However, I am really nervous about staying in a new city. Firstly, I don't have any friends or relatives over there. Secondly, I have never ever lived away from my parents. Moreover, I am a bad cook, and have no idea about good restaurants of that place.
My dear friend, as you are well aware of the city's infrastructure, could you please spare some time to guide me about a nice apartment to rent? Furthermore, I need your advice if I should bring my car or prefer public transport? Also, let me know if you want me to bring anything special for you?
Looking forward to seeing you again soon.
Your friend,
Sara Bell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
Dear Sam, How have you been? Its almost a year since we met. I hope you ...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...about staying in a new city. Firstly, I dont have any friends or relatives over ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22346368715 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31852325338 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670391061453 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0742573148 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.0 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7857142857 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378626710028 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119408755928 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800994671166 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203499741375 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677828329871 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.