You recently spent a vacation at the home of some friends who live in a different city Write a letter to your friends In your letter thank your friends for letting you stay with them describe some things you enjoyed about your vacation invite your friends

Essay topics

You recently spent a vacation
Dear friends,
How are you all? Although, I am back to my place physically, but mentally I am still there with you. This was the best vacation indeed.

First of all, I want to thank you for being such an entertaining hosts and letting me share your apartment. You guys have maintained the flat so gracefully, that the glimps of your habitat are still afresh in my thoughts.

The best thing about this holiday is, learning to play piano from Joy. Also, the picturesque sites we visited are adding to the grace of my phone's gallery. Aroma of the freshly baked buiscuits of "The Unique Bakery" is unforgettable.

I would be honoured, if you people come over some time. I owe you a lot, so, make a plan as early as possible to re-live all the fun.

Waiting for your visit.

Your friend,
Robert

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... topics You recently spent a vacation Dear friends, How are you all? Although...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80794701987 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56500932531 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.735099337748 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1928453944 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5833333333 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347949539156 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122109442403 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110912525453 0.0603063233224 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163165605081 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880199418467 0.0580467560999 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.73 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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