You recently spent a vacation at the home of some friends who live in a different city Write a letter to your friends In your letter thank your friends for letting you stay with them describe some things you enjoyed about your vacation invite your friends

Dear friends,

How are you all? Although, I am back to my place physically, but mentally I am still there with you. This was the best vacation and the most memorable trip indeed.

First of all, I want to thank you for being such an entertaining hosts and letting me share your apartment. You guys have maintained the flat so gracefully, that the glimps of your habitat are still afresh in my thoughts, and making me to think abot renovation my home.

The best thing about this holiday is, learning to play piano from Joy, I will definitely join music classes, also, the picturesque sites we visited are adding to the grace of my phone's gallery. Aroma of the freshly baked buiscuits of "The Unique Bakery" is unforgettable.

I would be honoured, if you people come over some time. I owe you a lot, so, make a plan as early as possible to re-live all the fun. I will be saddened if you decline my offer. Hope you would not say no.

Waiting for your visit.

Your friend,
Robert

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65921787709 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53531592644 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709497206704 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1717146351 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1538461538 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299896499881 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112589350222 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102735132937 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136103724531 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070192690044 0.0580467560999 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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