You have been selected for a training course on computer skills that you cannot attend. Write a letter to your employer and say:
Explain how this training course would help you
Why won’t you be able to attend it
Suggest a way to have that training again
Hi Sir,
I am writing this letter with regard to computer training program where I have selected, but due to certain reasons I will not be able to attend it.
This computer training program definitely going to help me to understand the new ERP module that is being use in our sales department. I have expressed my interest towards this training along with several other employees, as it is very imperative now a days. After considering employees request company arranged training program for us.
Actually, there is a client visit and its schedule is clashing with the dates of training and my presence is very much required during that client visit. That is why i am finding this impossible to attend training at that time.
Here i would like to let you know that, there are several other members of my team selected for the same training and they will also be not able to attend the session due to same reason. Hence, I would like to suggest if it is possible, please arrange a separate training program for my team on next month.
I hope you will consider my suggestion.
Looking forward to getting your response soon.
Thanks.
Your Faithfully
Lokesh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...her employees, as it is very imperative now a days. After considering employees request co...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...employees, as it is very imperative now a days. After considering employees request co...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d during that client visit. That is why i am finding this impossible to attend tr...
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Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to attend training at that time. Here i would like to let you know that, there ...
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Line 19, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Thanks. Your Faithfully Lokesh
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, look, so, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82673267327 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50354615665 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.516024948 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331203915222 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115564019657 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643025968814 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150399624837 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764885036877 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.