Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to regard my dissatisfaction with the phone I purchased in your store. It has been 3 days and it stopped working properly.
I bought iPhone XS mobile phone on Monday, June 12, 2019 for my wife in your store, just 3 days before. My wife was very excited about the new mobile I gifted her initially which was followed my frustration when she found that sound is not working any more. I verified again myself to ensure that it is not configuration glitch, but I am very surprised to see that it is a hardware problem. I am very disappointed with the quality of the product despite paying a huge amount.
I contacted customer support immediately to report this issue and they assured me to fix the issue within a week. I am still awaiting a reply from them. Now, I cannot get my device fixed, instead, expect to have a replacement of the device.
I am hoping for a quick resolution here from you and I insist on having a new mobile device to resolve the problem, otherwise, I will be forced to stop my payments to the store.
Yours faithfully,
John Cena
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: DATE_WEEKDAY[2]
Message: The date June 12, 2019 is not a Monday, but a Wednesday.
.... I bought iPhone XS mobile phone on Monday, June 12, 2019 for my wife in your store, just 3 days ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...roduct despite paying a huge amount. I contacted customer support immediately ...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ured me to fix the issue within a week. I am still awaiting a reply from them. No...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51741293532 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67338760973 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63184079602 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6742109496 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152124944256 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541002909002 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554893776001 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968683172066 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054125733822 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.