Hello Rohan Sir,
I am writing this letter to ask you about the trip that you are planning for my son and other children to another country, and I would like to join the trip.
I have heard from my son that the school has planned to take their students to Australia. I also got to know that you are searching for parents who can accompany you in the trip. In that regard, I would like to join this trip because I have been in Australia for my business trip and I know many things about its locals.
If you allow me to join the group, I will be also helpful to take care of one group of children and handling their belongings. I would like to ask you about the exact dare of arrival and departure so that I can take leaves in my office accordingly. Please share accommodation and expenditure details for the trip.
I am very excited about this trip and hoping for positive reply from you.
Your sincerely,
Modi
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Dear Sir/Madam, I would like…
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to inform you that I want to go on the excursion with my kid in foreign for whom you had asked and planned to visit in the next month. I would say thanks to you for giving me this opportunity.
I consider small tours are essential part of our life and there I will illustrate my kid about every important aspect of the places and buildings.
Kid security is a crucial thing and someone has to be there to guide him about good and bad things as well as I will help him to know well about places, analyzing things which will help him to recall the information easily in future.
I’m hankering to know about the tour and want to ask some questions to you. The first one is which hotel you have booked? How much it would cost? What are the places which you catch? Last but not least how many students are going in a trip?
I hope you will understand the importance of my role and give me the positive reply of my questions.
Yours faithfully
Sandeep Mishra
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed to take their students to Australia. I also got to know that you are searching...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35838150289 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31949696197 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531791907514 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7899024383 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7777777778 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232351107534 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100567263262 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605739465172 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155132439108 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660895276363 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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