Dear Sir,
My name is Rohan and I am a professional Wildlife photographer. Few days back, I visited one of your merchandise outlets to purchase brand new advanced camera for an upcoming expedition in South American Jungles. The Model is Canon 1DX Mark II worth of 5000 dollars.
However, I observed faulty len’s adjustment and broken flash while I was exploring options and other accessories of camera at home. Without making any further delay I returned the camera to same shop for refund of money. Whereas, one of your executives advised me to avail free repair service as product has warranty service. Owing to my requirement I agreed and requested him to arrange it as early as possible. Last week I revisited the shop for collecting the functional camera but to my surprise your representative informed me that repair could not be done because of some technical issues.
Please understand within 15 days Spring season will bloom in Amazon forest which is only time for photographers to take pictures of birds. Missing this opportunity will turn my investment over the said gadget as futile. Kindly understand my situation and instruct your officer to address my problem immediately either by refunding or replacing new camera of same model. If not, I will be forced to take legal action against your company. Along with this letter I have attached my warranty card and bill copy for your reference.
Yours faithfully,
Rohan.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06694560669 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77001984222 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702928870293 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5063309653 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156768062096 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479271581464 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044327358922 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990960145123 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375930483578 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.