Your local hospital has advertised for people to help to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter Explain why you would like to do unpaid work

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Your local hospital has advertised for people to help to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.

Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter

Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
Give details of when you would be available for this work.

Dear Sir,

I hope you are doing well. I’m writing this letter to you regarding the advertisement you have posted in the newspaper: required people as a helping hand in the hospital. I really wanted to be part of this great work.

I always have a keen interest in social service. I myself a social worker and prefer to help others interestingly. My agenda of living is to live for others. We all live for ourselves but living for others gives actual happiness.

I myself have a good experience in management. It would be easy for me to supervise everything like maintaining the stationary or management of janitors or maintaining the quantity of laboratory equipment etc.

This week I have some other commitments. But next week, I do not have any important meeting. So it would be easy for me to spare time and become part of such a notable social welfare. Kindly confirm me with the best suitable time and date within next week. I will put my efforts with complete zeal and endurance.

Looking forward to your reply. Thanks.

Yours faithfully
Ravi

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...have a keen interest in social service. I myself a social worker and prefer to he...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he quantity of laboratory equipment etc. This week I have some other commitments....
^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'look', 'really', 'regarding', 'so', 'well']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231884057971 0.220444632235 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.149758454106 0.167888034529 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0917874396135 0.0606518309736 151% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0386473429952 0.0506257000042 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.111111111111 0.118615021944 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0966183574879 0.107062808482 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0434782608696 0.041066498444 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75576706684 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338164251208 0.0385302599488 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0821256038647 0.0714148451538 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0144927536232 0.0191574576366 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1068.0 1141.60824742 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.134020619 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80434782609 5.53046319177 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342391304348 0.284621296913 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217391304348 0.211203875043 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16847826087 0.133321485273 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114130434783 0.0843313296314 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75576706684 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646739130435 0.622163163488 104% => OK
Word variations: 64.9745873627 62.8969750728 103% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 12.9587628866 131% => OK
Sentence length: 10.8235294118 16.4300151701 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.322550474 44.7399317507 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8235294118 90.9928171075 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8235294118 16.4300151701 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.352941176471 0.613754768223 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 32.5626598465 37.5504026743 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.24193548387 1.13073093955 110% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340084717045 0.331212695627 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0844562405386 0.0927372745006 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100024830726 0.0736520305886 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491652296857 0.579516596996 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192817244454 0.180689518051 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840720031771 0.122183219658 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873636595513 0.0765303033291 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0927955729859 0.211926503985 44% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0465528251518 0.0737400523855 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181617695152 0.203819188451 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090899638841 0.067151250289 135% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.45360824742 174% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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