You have a Facebook friend living in another country and he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Shivam,
Hope you are doing well. It's been only two months that I have moved to US, yet it seems that only yesterday I have seen you. However, I assume you how much are impatient to learn about the news which highlighted me recently in this pandemic of Covid-19.
Let me tell in detailed, As you would have seen the news over ABC news channel about the current going advance research methods to find an superior antidote of all covid-19 strains. Fortunately, the American medical research team has happened to be develop one of the vaccine which is going for medical trails and I happened to be a human tester volunteer in this course.
Many people were interested into volunteer for this social cause to humankind. However, it was too tough to get selected because of certain medical parameters, and I with many others social fighters found to be fit for the medical trail of the new vaccine. It has a minor effect of fever and headache for 48 hours. Afterwards, you'll be free from the any covid-19 strain disease. This vaccine will cure any man or woman of any age as it has been tested on younglings, adults, and elderly people. I hope that the development of this vaccine will be spread across the globe and soon you will be able to have a taste of it's effects.
I hope that I am able to answer all your necessary questions in this letter. However, let me know if you required any additional information which could be discussed over phone call.
Hope to hear response from you soon.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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| 2022-01-09 | shain | 73 | view |
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| 2021-01-31 | swodha | 81 | view |
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- Technology has changed human relationships do you think it s positive or negative 73
- Some people think that new technology always improves the lives of workers Others believe that it results in disadvantages for workers Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers while others believe that the attitude of the student is more important Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- You have borrowed money from your bank You agreed to repay a fixed amount every month However it will be difficult to pay any money back this month Write an email to the bank in about 150 200 words Your email should do the following things State the amoun 87
- Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money How might having a lot of money make people happy What other things in life can make people happy 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... going advance research methods to find an superior antidote of all covid-19 strai...
^^
Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... and headache for 48 hours. Afterwards, youll be free from the any covid-19 strain di...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65073529412 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43682893788 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9217359751 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10343446654 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346218663073 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418504007321 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633769303051 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335894054555 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.