You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Jerry,
Hope you are having good time!
Let me share a major news story from my country, something you specifically asked for in your last letter.
I cannot talk about anything else other than the recently concluded Lok Sabha polls. To give a brief information, it is the world’s largest democratic process of electing Member of Parliaments (MPs) and the Prime Minister of our country. Due to its sheer size, the process is spread over 10 weeks with the polling happening in phases across different parts of the country. BJP has won the maximum number of seats and Narendra Modi has been elected as the Prime Minister of India.
Majority of the citizens are very much involved in this process, be it young or old. The vital reason for everyone is the announcement of candidates for Prime Minister from each party. Many people vote for a strong leader even ignoring local leader who is contesting. There are lots of debates in newsrooms, lunch tables, evening walks, etc.
I also followed the results very closely as my maternal uncle contested the election from Yamunanagar seat from BJP. Having campaigned for him extensively in the run upto elections, it is very joyful for me to share that he has won with a huge margin.
I think this should give you some flavor of the elections in India and you can schedule a visit during the next elections to be part of this frenzy.
Take care!
Atul Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82520325203 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4995108253 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662601626016 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6425238789 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3076923077 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109142760588 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312008556088 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617960711355 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706624636541 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082086607779 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.