You have a full-time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter,
• describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take.
Dear Mr.Sam,
I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to continue with the part-time business administration course.
I started this course six months ago to help me switch from my current technical job to a managerial position. I was able to balance work and study because the project in hand was simple, and I used to have plenty of spare time.
Unfortunately, I have been assigned a challenging project which is very critical to the business and must be completed within one year, and in order to meet the deadline, I have to work overtime. Thus, I will not be able to pursue this course.
Since the first semester's exams are scheduled to take place next week, I will take a leave to attend them, but I need to defer this course for one year.
Your cooperation is highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Ahmed Ali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sam
Dear Mr.Sam, I am writing to inform you...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Sam, I am writing to inform you that I will b...
^^^^
Line 13, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...technical job to a managerial position. I was able to balance work and study beca...
^
Line 37, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y appreciated. Yours sincerely, Ahmed Ali
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91216216216 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68742302453 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668918918919 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7974853824 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172923088779 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707026683706 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592719079747 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898071775189 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789498191677 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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