You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home. Write a letter to the council:
- How you heard about the plan?
- Explain how you feel about it?
- Ask for more information about it?
Dear Sir,
I am a resident of Valencia apartments situated at the Western Expressway and I am writing to enquire about the upcoming shopping center project.
I came across the development plan while listening to the local radio station, as well as, I read about the same in the recent weekly periodical of Estate News.
I am pleased that the local authorities have approved and welcomed the idea of a shopping complex in the vicinity. This would mean, the localities will no longer have to drive miles towards the downtown every weekend fetching groceries and mandatory supplies.
As a curious inhabitant, I would like to know that by when we are expecting the commencement of the commercial complex. Additionally, will the shopping space be confined to brands of apparels or electronic gadgets or will the mall have hyper city or supermarket catering to daily needs. Last but not the least, during the construction phase will there be any road closures or route diversions.
Looking forward for your response.
Your’s faithfully
Alex Jhonson
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20930232558 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86459807304 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691860465116 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3938059192 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136273449388 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482238783483 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409576315455 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693764206116 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367955563572 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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