Some people think that children should be sent to nursery school before they go to primary school, while others think it is better if they stay at home?
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
At what age should a child be exposed to education system is a debatable topic where individuals have their personal justifications. Many people argue that children should be sent to elementary school prior to nursery while on the other hand, quite a few individuals suggest that kids should spend their time at home before getting enrolled to the nursery classes. The essay describes the advantages and disadvantages of enrolling in early schooling.
Plethora of observational studies provide evidence that early exposure to the classroom environment helps the kid develop their cognitive abilities, alongside increases the curiosity to learn new things. Additionally, this early interaction with the outside world, helps the child to understand and interact with his/ her peers and teachers and makes them more confident. Moreover, familiarizing the kid to the preparatory school enhances behavioral attributes such as listening to others or helping one another.
Despite the advantages, quite a few people, object the concept of exposing the children to the outside world at such a nascent stage, as they are vulnerable to juvenile crime. The fact cannot be denied that, at this early stage children do not have proper judging and decision making ability, owing which, they can fall prey to various heinous wrongdoings. Furthermore, spending time with family, strengthens the emotional bond between the parents and the young ones.
Admission to nursery school, henceforth, is subjected to various factors, including mutual consent of parents and kids and mental growth of the children. In my view, introducing children to nursery education at an early stage, prepares them for formal education. Therefore, elementary school is important than staying at home.
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Suggestion:
... including mutual consent of parents and kids and mental growth of the children. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54243542435 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89402421418 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0431244238 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247142294482 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834423161573 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835053274384 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143726786955 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788631847336 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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