You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbor to come
Dear Raw,
My name is Vishal Bhat, a retired teacher from government higher secondary school. More importantly I am your new neighbor just opposite your flat door moved last Sunday. I am writing this letter to make you aware that tonight there will be noise during evening time because my family and I are planning to have get together for new house.
As per the plans for tonight’s party, it will start at 7 pm with the gathering of my all friends and relatives. We have booked DJ for the music and buffet dinner after the drinks. Probably the party will continue till midnight.
It will be great pleasure for us if you with your family can join us tonight, by this way we can come to know each other also. Therefore, I cordially like to invite your completely family on the welcome party of my new house and please consider this as a formal invitation and join with us to make this party more memorable.
I am waiting for you at my door step sharply at 7 p.m.
With regards,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Raw, My name is Vishal Bhat, a retired teache...
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Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...se my family and I are planning to have get together for new house. As per the ...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...this way we can come to know each other also. Therefore, I cordially like to invite ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... step sharply at 7 p.m. With regards, Vishal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39265369241 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5387502878 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7777777778 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275841000337 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103192187387 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096739842173 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149762643885 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952504658475 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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