You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear John,
How are you feeling now? I am writing this letter to inform that we had played against South Africa last Sunday and our team won the game of cricket, and Sunny your brother received an award Player of the tournament.
At the morning hours it start raining for some minutes and that helps us in bowling and field, especially spinners to have variations which helps them to bowled out the complete team on 105 score only. At the later hours it was bright sunny day and we chased the score in 15 overs only without loosing wicket. More importantly, the due in the pitch from rain showers gave us an advantage to stop South African batsmen on early.
I am happy and excited as a caption after winning maiden trophy for the team. Everyone is feeling wonderful after winning the game and also missed you badly. This winning have made us to feel confident for upcoming tournament against West Indies. I hope you will recover soon and ready to be the part of next tour.
Get well soon my friend.
Best wishes,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, How are you feeling now? I am writing th...
^^^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Get well soon my friend. Best wishes, Vishal
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon my friend. Best wishes, Vishal
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58918918919 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1563706218 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697297297297 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4109443306 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17317135082 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533598926369 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523112490305 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09939951041 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802955145265 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.