You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what is wrong with the furniture
• say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. smith,
I am writing this letter to show my dissatisfaction regarding the furniture that offered in my rented apartment. I belong to Spain and moved here in Canada along with my family and worked as a lecturer at Seneca college, Toronto.
Although, it is impossible to get everything perfect in a new living place but the issues related to routinely use items is not ignored. Firstly, the screws of the main door are too loose that makes to shatter the door during opening/ closing it and also put our security at risk. Moreover, the sofa-sets are not comfortable enough, the outer cover of it torn out as well the internal springs of seats came out that cause pain when seating for few hours. Besides this, window glass of kitchen area broken previously that adds up additional discomfort to work in the kitchen.
To resolve these problems, I would appreciate if you could tighten the front door screws along with that replace window panels. I suggest to remove the sofa-sets as we do not have any necessity of it.
I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem.
Yours sincerely,
abc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest removing'.
Suggestion: suggest removing
...long with that replace window panels. I suggest to remove the sofa-sets as we do not have any nec...
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Line 12, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to my problem. Yours sincerely, abc
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78461538462 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58165275869 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697435897436 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9483410623 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123473567115 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496025792495 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522543976534 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668005895174 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352536281332 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.