You have just received a credit card statement from your bank The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make Write a letter to the bank manager In the letter Introduce yourself Explain that you did not buy the items

Essay topics:

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.

Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:

• Introduce yourself.

• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.

• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I, Sharmistha Naskar, am an existing bank account holder of the HDFC Bank. Also, I am an active credit card holder of this bank. Here is my bank account information:
A/C:432423746238
IFSC code: SD7858

Yesterday, I received last cycle credit card bill where I noticed there are few expensive purchases which I have not made. I crosschecked all purchase ietms once again to verify that by mistakenly I have not bought those. Hence, I can assure you from my end that those transactions were not made from my end. Moreover, I never let anybody else to use my card. Neither my parents or siblings or any of my friends know my card PIN. There is a 2-factor verification activated for secure transactions.

For your information, I always maintain a very good credit score.

I would like to request you to take a look at my last billing details and please clarify the reasons of those unexpected transactions and fixed this issue at your earliest before last payment date. Please make sure that I must not get such spooky purchase details with my card details.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 380, Rule ID: NEITHER_NOR[1]
Message: Use 'nor' with neither.
Suggestion: nor
...else to use my card. Neither my parents or siblings or any of my friends know my c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71439535501 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2946871504 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.75 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207241036558 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741908232356 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478886416845 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114578138047 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392495732396 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.