you were hurt in a minor accident inside the a super market, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.
write a letter to manger of the super market. In your letter
1. say who you are
2. give details about the accident
3. suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you in reference to complain about a minor accident in which I got hurt at your supermarket.
My name is Brendon Macullum and I live at 35, MacArthur street, Perth. I often visit your store to buy grocery items for daily needs. I would like to bring to your notice a recent incident at your store which left me injured, it was last week Thursday and as a usual business, I was in your store to buy some dairy products in the dairy section where I slipped and fell down. When I recovered from the fall the noticed that the floor was slippery and wet. There was no signboard from your staff to show that the floor was recently mopped. I have seen the same incident happening last month to another elderly customer where he nearly slipped on the wet floor and broke his ankle.
I am disappointed and would like to suggest to you to coördinate with your staff and recommend them to put a signboard to tell the customers that the floor is wet so that the customer will be careful while walking on the wet section.
I look forward to your immediate action on this.
Yours sincerely
Brendon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to you in reference to comp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I live at 35, MacArthur street, Perth. I often visit your store to buy grocery it...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l while walking on the wet section. I look forward to your immediate action o...
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Line 8, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to your immediate action on this. Yours sincerely Brendon
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...diate action on this. Yours sincerely Brendon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4347826087 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36005048024 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8234424467 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123217157653 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517287188178 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783157791766 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110530428172 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112448820258 0.0580467560999 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.