You have just spent sweep with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend in your letter
Thank your friend for the holiday
Explain that you left your wallet in their house.
Give them instruction of how to send it back to you
Dear balaji,
Hope you are doing well, thanks a lot for giving me a wonderful stay during my holidays. It was a joyful experience in India. Perhaps, it is one of my best holidays that ever spent in my entire life and sorry for not staying more than a week. However, will be back next month and let's enjoy rest of the places we left.
Only after arriving home, noticed that my wallet was missing and im pretty sure that it's in ur room were we was staying. while packing it was missed usually it will be in my pocket. Because of the hurry missed the wallet there. Although it has all my original ID proofs in it. So that, try to understand the seriousness of it.
So try to send it through fedex courier who makes a fast delivery around the globe. Nevertheless, try to check weather all the originals are present in wallet and try to send it as quick as possible you can.
Thanking you
Revanth
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...k. However, will be back next month and lets enjoy rest of the places we left. On...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...hat its in ur room were we was staying. while packing it was missed usually it will b...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat its in ur room were we was staying. while packing it was missed usually it will b...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...missed usually it will be in my pocket. Because of the hurry missed the wallet there. A...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e of the hurry missed the wallet there. Although it has all my original ID proofs in it....
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36094674556 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2663726089 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9713931942 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4166666667 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122434126355 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476533524307 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553681651201 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674448241706 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211320429456 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.