You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. when you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
write a letter to your friend, in your letter"
thank your friend for the holiday
explain that you left your wallet in their house
give them instructions of how how to send it back to you
Dear ABC,
It was wonderful meeting you after a very long time and I thoroughly enjoyed my stay with you in Delhi.
I am pleased with hospitality and the love you have shown during my visit. It was one of the most memorable holidays of my life so far. I am happy that you helped me in exploring the city and showing me the wonderful places in the city, which i would not have been in a position to explore by own.
I have reached Ahmedabad this afternoon, while unpacking my stuff I realized that i have forgotten to carry my wallet which was placed inside the drawer kept in the almirah of the left hand side room in your home.
I am wondering if it possible for you to send it back to me at earliest. I have just got to know that of my relative in Delhi and will be traveling back tomorrow through train, this train is going to depart from New Delhi Railway Station at 5:30 pm, would appreciate if you could meet him and handover my wallet to him. I will give you his contact number so that you both can co-ordinate with each other.
Please so let me know once you handed over the purse to him.
Thank you
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the wonderful places in the city, which i would not have been in a position to ex...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he left hand side room in your home. I am wondering if it possible for you to ...
^
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you to send it back to me at earliest. I have just got to know that of my relati...
^
Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...meet him and handover my wallet to him. I will give you his contact number so tha...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22222222222 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23696881794 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2521174058 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277317315818 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12108168922 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573869040631 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137518278487 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332943266623 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.